We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
· An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
· Reasons for our opinion,
· An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion everyone should have their own computer or laptop because you would not fight over it. When kids are older they would be able to get a job.
I think we should have more computers. I love computers but I do not get to use them.
1 comment:
I like your monky Dylan
from Hamish have a good tiem
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